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Chapter 5 Teasers!

Posted on 2009.08.10 at 23:17
My Mood: tiredTired
Currently Listening to: Nothin'
So I've decided that I'll probably post a chapter a week...at least until I get a few more chapters written. I just like to have chapters in reserve so I can spread out updates. Call me weird, but I'd rather have an update  a week rather than an update every day for 5 days...then nothing for another month X_X So sorry if you guys are different (let me know!) but that's just how I roll and what I plan to do.

So anyway. I've just finished chapter 7 for both Shuuhei and Ichigo, and I'm up to prompt 50 for my Kaien drabbles. YAY! I feel so accomplished, I love it x3 So...that's the updates.

Back to what I was talking about. Since I'll update once a week, I'll update both a bit later. But until then, here's a teaser from each to maybe hold you over XD

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You were wandering through the Rukon District, your stomach about to devour itself due to your hunger pangs. You weren't sure when the last time you ate was, but you were starving and needed food. Now.

"Well well! What have we here? A tattered little girl wandering the streets!"

You cautiously turned at the sound of the gruff voice, seeing a group of three equally gruff-looking men all staring at you with amusement. You shrunk back, covering the tears in your dress to hopefully hide the fact that you were poor and practically defenseless.

"Aww, look! She's scared! What say we bring her home with us and have a little fun?" the second asked with a smirk.

"Yeah, I like that idea," the third agreed. All three began to slowly stalk towards you, forcing you backwards as you avoided their advances. "Come on...We won't hurt you. Much."

Tears formed in your eyes as you shook your head. "N-no! Please, stay back!"

The men continued slowly marching forward, each of them grinning wickedly through their thick beards.

"I SAID STAY BACK!" you yelled, a burst of energy exploding from your being. The men stopped, staring at you wide-eyed as the surge of Spiritual Pressure stopped them in their tracks.

Unfortunately, as suddenly as it had appeared, it ended, leaving you standing defenseless once again.

"Heh. Looks like the little girl has quite a bit of Spiritual Pressure!"

"Too bad she doesn't know how to use it!"

You shrunk back yet again as they continued forward once more. "Please, don't!" you cried, holding your arms in front of you for protection as you turned away. The three men laughed darkly as the pressed forward; you could've sworn one of them was already drooling.

"Get away from her!"

You lowered your arms and peered over them, the three men before you turning around to look at the new voice..

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"Are you sure you'll be okay?"

You rubbed your eyes as you stopped in front of your house. "Yeah...I think so. I'm sorry, Lieutenant. I should be stronger..."

"Kana. Shut up." He stepped in front of you and placed his hands on your shoulders. "It's hard to see that many bodies, and within days of each other? It's hard for me to stomach. I don't expect you to be fine from this, Kana."

"But...I..." You turned away with a sad sigh. 'It's not just that. It's worse than you could imagine, Shuuhei...So much worse...' You closed your eyes as a yawn forced its way out of your mouth.

"Hey, you look tired. Are you feeling okay? Did you sleep alright?"

Sleep. You weren't sure if you even slept at all. You supposed you did, seeing as you blacked out and that would be the only explanation. But the tiredness you felt suggested otherwise. "I...I think so," you commented, looking away from his caring eyes.

"Hey." He reached up and gently cupped your face, turning you up to face him. "Go get some rest. I'll handle the paperwork. There was only 14 so it won't take as long as last time."

'Only,' you thought bitterly as you closed your eyes in a wince, forcing tears out upon doing so. 'But what will it be next time? 32? 65? Who can tell when this will end?'  "Are...you sure?"

"Yeah, of course," he said as he pulled away, his hands still on your shoulders. "It's my job, anyway. You don't need to help."

You turned to the side reluctantly. "O-okay..."

"Good." He smiled and rubbed your head affectionately before he dropped his hands to his side. "Get some sleep. I'll come back to check on you later."

"Thanks, Shuuhei..." He smiled and nodded his head towards your door, showing that he wouldn't leave until you headed inside. You laughed bitterly as you turned and did so, throwing one last glance over your shoulder, seeing him look at you expectantly. "Good-bye...Shuuhei." You closed the door behind you as a tear fell from your eyes. 'Forever...'

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Oooooh~ HOPEFULLY YOU GUYS ARE AS EXCITED AS I AM! Cuz I know I'd be. Heh.

Anyway. Let me know what you guys think x3 Thanks for all of the feedback and reviews so far. I love you allll! 


Comments:


saiyajin_hime at 2009-08-12 03:36 (UTC) (Link)
{hangs head self-consciously} Like I mentioned in a review, I haven't been keeping up with Bleach lately. I'll try to catch up though knowing me it'll take forever, but if anything I can just Google. I'm still on a DBZ high (not to mention there's now DBKai) that I don't see going away anytime soon :D But! I love your writing so I'll still try to keep up with the anime. Speaking of stories, I'm still anxiously awaiting to read more of your Roy story!

And it looks like FOS is down again. :/
Clara
xclarabelle at 2009-08-13 10:01 (UTC) (Link)
I'M EXCITED

I'M REALLY EXCITED

SO EXCITED THAT I'M USING CAPS AND SPACING EVERYTHING OUT

AND NEGLECTING PERIODS AND/OR EXCLAMATION MARKS

THAT WAS GREAT

FOSFF, STOP HATING ME AND COME UP SO LINDSEY CAN POST HER STUFF

I'M DYING WITHOUT THEM
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